Beautifullll! I understand very little of it, but it's a busy week for me and I've not had much time to sit down and look carefully.
It's interesting how you connect some of the lines and make "shortcuts" with some letters ("r" for example). I definitely think this is worth doing as a regular exercise, there's a lot to be learned. Perhaps some of our lesson material could be used.
I'll post mine after my ridiculously busy week. Since I can hardly form a sentence on my own, I will probably borrow heavily from the latest lessons

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